The most important skill that I have learned in this cause is why and how to properly cite the sources. Now I know how to use the sources to support my argument. For example, we should use quotation marks to cite the article name while type the book name use italic. The most challenging skill is the work cited. The improvements of my grammar and writing skills are due to the practices. During the continuously practice, I gradually get the feeling of writing and remember the grammar and verbs that I misused before. The tutorials did help me a lot in the aspect of grammar and syntax in writing. I still need to work on the way to find accurate quotations to support my opinion.
When I received the comments from professor, I fixed the errors and tried to understand the reasons. Then I went through the article and found some sentences that can be improved. People’s opinions of the script mostly focused on the organization and the content, like telling more about the reason why the government wants to resist Cantonese. I used the pictures following the time order. In different time period, I used the transition words to connect two paragraphs. The story is good as far as I am concerned, but the music seems to be too weak and the pictures are too much Chinese for comprehension. I have written some explanation in the video to translate the main idea of each photo.
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