blog 7 by Shengyu

The most important thing that I learned from this class is how to cite the idea of others. I had totally no idea what plagiarism is, and it will cause that I may plagiarize by accident. For example, I might use other’s word without citing, because I thought that is not big deal. However, after this class, I have clearly known that how to avoid plagiarism. Moreover, I learned that how to write summary. It is also important and practical in the future. I learned the informative sentences and descriptive sentences, and how to use them. After writing a summary, I can edit some grammar mistake by myself. And I also learned how to use software “COCA” to find a more reasonable word. About argument essay, it is the first time I write a one thousand words essay. And I have been a hard time to write it. In the first draft, you cannot see any of logic in my essay. Fortunately, I edited this problem at second draft. However, the tense in the sentence is the problem that I still need to improve.

For the digital story, I changed several topic for it and finally decided to write the memorable story at BSE. Time in BSE is very important for me. In eight days, I changed a lot. In other word, I grow up. I learned the responsibility for a leader. When I wrote the script, I even can imagine what picture I will use for this sentence. However, the first draft described too less about details. This comment makes my digital story more excellent. For the voice, I went to the whisper room twice and got a satisfying voice file and find my favorite music combining them together. I also adjusted elaborately for the picture’s length of time. Finally, I got a well-content work.