The most happy time
My high school is life is an turning point in my life.I have ever go through the High school exam. This exam is one of the most difficult exam all over the world. Because Chinese high school student study the most difficult math, physics and biology and so on. Every student do want go through that life . The reason that we should work hard everyday and we should go on one year. Try our best for our same goals .The goal is a good university in China. When the high school exam over, I just say everything will be better next day and my university is Harbin industry university. Maybe Chinese student have ever heard this university.
When the high school life over. My university life is beginning. I like university life because everyday is flexible and i can do everything if i want. My parents does not let me study everyday. I consider that my Chinese university life it is my best time in that time. With the time go by I found i do not have the goals. My day life is play computer and play basketball and so on. At that time i want to go back the high school time because i can work hard every time for one goal. But the time is in the past. I can not go back. So i choose go abroad to continue my learning life.
When i decide to go abroad i found my life have a goal is the IBT. This exam is hard for me the reason that i have not touch English after i graduated form the high school. When 3 months go by my IBT grade is come out. The score is 84 . Probably this score is not high enough but i try my best in that time. When it over my U.S life is beginning. I like the U.S life although everyday is tired but i have my goal i can work hard every day until the dream come true.
Life need the goals I will i will work hard from this time.
It's a good story, I also have the same feeling. However, you also have some mistakes, like "consider" can not add "that" behind it, and "although" can not use with "but".
ReplyDeleteThx buddy. We should work hard every day in order to get a good GPA for our master
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ReplyDeleteWho is the master you refer to? Also, now I am wondering - is this your story about Harbin or did you change it?? This blog should be about your digital story.
I will change it !
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